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Everything can be yours
But only if you do as they say.

Have your own life and love
But only if you follow the rules.

Make the money you desire
As soon as you sell your soul.

She will always love you
As long as you don't love her too much.

Stay ahead of the rest
But make sure you go with the flow.

Become successful
After you admit defeat.

Be free
Inside their cage.

Smile and laugh
As you hear the biggest lie.
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A poem I wrote about a month ago. Additionally I have submitted it to a local magazine contest, so I hope that I will gain recognition for my work soon.
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~theLUsir Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Interesting take on the Freedom concept. I like your +/- structure in this poem.

Good luck on the magazine!
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~nocturnal-movement Feb 18, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you.
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